管理员 萨卡 发布于十月 4, 2015 管理员 分享 发布于十月 4, 2015 max0627lps 发表于 2015-10-3 23:35可以說一下原因嗎？ 是因為不有趣，還是別的？ 无论是拼写还是语法, 都惨不忍睹 链接到点评
管理员 萨卡 发布于十月 4, 2015 管理员 分享 发布于十月 4, 2015 fdcrane 发表于 2015-10-3 23:41Would be slightly better if you put it this way~ due to the poor performance in grammar department. due to poor grammar. improve my English and also set my first step into this somehow unique forum "and also" is redundant. guide of an RPG game, I found this forum walkthrough for a RPG game, I stumbled upon this forum Thus I decided to sign up and give this self-introduction. Therefore... Life seems to be boring without clubs, bars or even friends, then I found myself drawn to the situation where I play video games for most of my days, which, by the way, includes CS:GO, LoL and other games I own on steam. remove "to be". sentence is too wordy. 大概看了下... 链接到点评
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